CAUSES OF CANCERIn today’s world, many things cause serious illnesses. One of the most important serious illnesses is cancer from which a lot of people suffer because today there are many factors which cause to be cancer.First of all, the most important effect is radiation that causes of to be cance
CAUSES OF CANCER
In today’s world, many things cause serious illnesses. One of the most important serious illnesses is cancer from which a lot of people suffer because today there are many factors which cause to be cancer.
First of all, the most important effect is radiation that causes of to be cancer because it is a factor which influences on all body cells. For instance, cells that be exposed to radiation multiply without control. Also, it causes to originate unhealthy cell groups. These cell groups obstruct in another body cells to work regularly. Therefore, healthy cells can not live and person suffers from cancer.
Another factor that causes cancer is poor diet because healthy cells mean rich diet. A healthy cell needs many vitamins, much mineral and enough water. Therefore, bad nutrition affects cells and causes to be sick. The cells which are unhealthy can’t work and the person who eats bad can suffer from cancer.
Last but not least, the reason that causes cancer psychological conditions because it is really important for human healthy body. According to many research, psychological problems influence on body cells. For example, many stressful people suffer from cancer because the cells of stressful people multiply without control of genetic codes. Also, this means that unhealthy cells groups will be in human body.
In conclusion, people of today suffer from many diseases because of there are many bad factors for human body. Also these bad factors can cause cancer. Therefore, there are many reasons which cause cancer.
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Essay'de therefor'lar, in the meantime'lar also'lar önemlidir ancak sen çok boğmuşsun yazıyı. Biraz daha sadeleştir yazıyı. Conclusion'ı bir daha yaz.
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in another değil in other
person suffers değil people suffer
the reason that causes cancer psychological conditions değil psychological conditions cause cancer
Also, this means değil this also would mean
bad nutrition değil malnutrition
bad factor nedir? değiştirin
1) bunun gibi onlarca hata var
2) içerik neredeyse boş
3) cümleleri gereksizce kompleks hale getirmişsiniz,
4) 3 paragralık yazıda Last but not least falan gibi kalıplara gerek yok.
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