şu text'te gramer hatası veya herhangi bir hata var mı?
merhaba arkadaşlar. şu text'te gramer hatası veya herhangi bir hata var mı? yardımcı olursanız sevinirim.Carlos buys a new car. It's a very expensive car. It's a huge, blue,fast car. While driving down the street, Carlos sees a girl on a bicycle.She has long blond hair and is beautiful.He yells to h
merhaba arkadaşlar. şu text'te gramer hatası veya herhangi bir hata var mı? yardımcı olursanız sevinirim.
Carlos buys a new car. It's a very expensive car. It's a huge, blue,
fast car. While driving down the street, Carlos sees a girl on a bicycle.
She has long blond hair and is beautiful.
He yells to her, "What's up?"
She ignores him.
He yells, "How's it going?"
She keeps going and ignores him.
He yells, "Hey, why won't you talk to me? I want to go to dinner with
you. I'll take you to an expensive restaurant."
The girl turns, gets off the bike, and looks at him. She says, "I don't
want to go to dinner. But if you give me your car, I will give you a surprise."
Carlos says, "OK!" He jumps out of the car. He gives her the keys
and says, "Here are the keys."
The beautiful blond takes the keys and then kisses Carlos on the
cheek. Then she jumps into the car and drives away.
Carlos stands on the sidewalk. Now he has no car and no girl. He
says, "That's it, just a kiss on the cheek?"
He gets on her bike and rides home.
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justice is might (
19.08.15)
1- blond değil blonde
2- "Hey, why won't you talk to me?" değil "Hey, why don't you talk to me?" olacak. Hey neden benimle konuşmayacaksın? demek absürt, hey neden benimle konuşmuyorsun düzgün bir cümle.
3- expensive restaurant yerine luxurious restaurant daha uygun.
4- "He gets on her bike and rides home." deyince gramer hatası yapmışın gibi duruyor, he gets on the girl's bike and rides home yaz derim.
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bana kalırsa yok ancak yell fiili at alır diye aklımda kalmış. bir de azarlamak anlamı taşıyor shout, shout put daha uygun olabilir miydi diye şüphe ettim. bilen versa cevap versin please
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@irsh92 yell uygun. Shout daha çok sinirlenerek bağırmak ya da simitçi bağırması için falan kullanılır.
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