merhaba dostlar,ielts hakkinda tecrube ve bilgi sahibi arkadaslardan skor vermelerini istiyorum bana bir fikir olmasi acisindan. yorum, duzeltme vs de sevindirecektir. The chart compares the expenditures on a range of consumer goods in four European countries. It is clear that Britain's amount spen
merhaba dostlar,
ielts hakkinda tecrube ve bilgi sahibi arkadaslardan skor vermelerini istiyorum bana bir fikir olmasi acisindan. yorum, duzeltme vs de sevindirecektir.
The chart compares the expenditures on a range of consumer goods in four European countries. It is clear that Britain's amount spent on six consumer goods is highest in four European countries. It is also noticeable that the photographic film is most popular consumer good.
According to the information, British people spent about 155000 pounds for personal stereos. In other European countries, the expenditures were around 150000 pounds for same consumer good. The figure of tennis racquets expenditures show that France has the lowest figure with 1450000 pounds. British people consumed more perfume than people of other four European countries. They spent about 160000 pounds for perfumes while other European countries expenditures approximately 150000 pounds.
In Britain, amount spent on CDs was more than 160000 pounds. Germany's figure was the lowest again. Italy's and France's figures were higher and higher, about 145000 and 150000, respectively. In consumption of toy, French and Italian people bought equally while the consumption of toys was more less in Germany. Photographic film expenditure reached to 170000 pounds in Britain, whereas Germans just spent about 145000 pounds for photographic films.
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bir defa girdim ve istediğim puanı almıştım. bununla 5.5 ya da 6 alırsın diye tahmin ediyorum.
biraz daha fazla kalıp kelimeler kullanmaya çalışmanı tavsiye ederim. çok fazla tekrar yapma bi de. ve sürekli karşılaştırarak yazmaya çalış bu tip grafikleri.
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