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Speaking Presentation için yardım.

Hi, everyone. Today i am going to talk about my curious memory. I experienced an interesting event in my first moments here. In the first weeks, I wanted to travel all around the Izmir . I didn't know izmir at all so it was very diffucult to tour without guide. One day, we decided to go to Cesme with my bestfriend. (I came here from Istanbul with him by the way) We didn't know how to go cesme. First, we went to way out of cesme of our school. There aren't any busses to go there so we started to hitchhike. Thirty minutes later, a van approached us and a man who is driving the van welcomed us to get into car. After a little bit chatting with that old man, we arrived at Ilıca. We took along our swimsuits so we went to sea directly. The weather was too windy and the sea was too wavy. There were lots of people who were wind surfing. The sea didn't seem suitable to swim but we thought that we came here from a distance. We should do something extraordinary. After that we decided to swim. We found a changing room (of course we didn't pay for it) and we wore our swimsuits. Five minutes later, we was ready to swim. When we started to swim, we couldn't swim away from coastline because of waviness. Surfers were jumping over our heads, they were surfing with parachute. There weren't any people except us who were swimming. After 1 hours, we decided to not swim any more. Misfortune has started at this moment. We went back to the beach to get our bags and we were shocked. We saw that our bags were under the sea water. The sea covered on the beach and we realized that we are too late. Immediately, we ran to our bags and we checked them. Unfortunately, Everything got wet includes, our money, our clothes ,towels and even my phone. We waited to get dry an hour. We didn't know what should we do, we tried to hitchhike but we couldn't be succeed. The sky got dark and we were still walking. Finally, we arrived at Alacatı from the beach. Quickly, we went to bus terminal but we missed buses. There was no more bus until tomorrow so we decided to stay outside during whole night. While we were looking for a park to sleep, we realized that four punks were tracking us. We were too tired to beat them so we made a decision that Alaçatı is a dangerous place at nights. We found a taxi and we dealed for one hundred twenty liras to go to IZTECH. Finally, we arrived at dormitory safe and sound and our adventure finished here but my phone wasn't working I am going to show you the last photo was taken by my spoiled phone.

Thank you for listening.

Harf hatalarına takılmayın. Gramatik ve mantıki olarak düzeltebilir misiniz? Yarına ödevim var emin olmak istiyorum.

Ayrıca -the sea covered on the beach- google translatevari bi cümle mi bu? Denizin sahili kaplaması

 
genelde olmus...

After 1 hours, we decided to not swim any more yerine:
after an hour, we decided not to swim...

Everything got wet includes, our money, our clothes ,towels and even my phone.
yerine:
everything got wet including, ...

The sky got dark and we were still walking yerine:
it was getting dark and we were...

well done
  • parcxerox  (16.01.14 23:21:43) 
eğer sınav tırt bi üniversitenin tırt bi ingilizce sınavı değilse araya biraz doğaçlama da katman iyi olur.


  • tembel  (17.01.14 00:43:30) 
we was ready to swim benim gozume carpan. we were olacak tabiki


  • fcked up as usual  (17.01.14 08:47:13) 
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