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ingilizce bilenlerin gorusune ihtiyacim var.
simdi ozetle sirket parti duzenliyor ben poster tasarimini yapicam. --------------------Dear All,We are happy to announce that you are all invited to our party at xxxx. Let's have fun together!• The shuttle will be running at 21:30 at the entrance of the building.• Since the factory did not open off
simdi ozetle sirket parti duzenliyor ben poster tasarimini yapicam.
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Dear All,
We are happy to announce that you are all invited to our party at xxxx. Let's have fun together!
• The shuttle will be running at 21:30 at the entrance of the building.
• Since the factory did not open officially, we kindly ask you not to make any check-in there with your social media applications.
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yukaridaki satirlarda grammer olarak bir hata var mi? yada soyle daha profesyonel/siirsel olur gibi goruslerinize de cok ihtiyacim var.
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the shuttle will depart.
factory is not open officially.
(seninki de doğru ama) we kindly ask you to abstain from checking in (ya da avoid check-ins) daha güzel olur.
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she was my baby
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10.02.16)
abstain veya avoid bence de. bir de "with your social media applications" yerine through your social media accounts daha iyi gibi.
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kulakligin calismayan teki
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10.02.16)